Observation Peer Review

 

Title ________________________________   Author ___________________________

 

Reviewer ______________________________

 

Note: Please give your classmates specific comments whenever possible.

 

  1. What are the major strengths of the paper? What works best?

 

 

 

 

  1. Does the paper create a clear dominant impression and show the reader a new way of looking at the topic?

 

 

 

 

 

  1. Does the author reflect on the significance of the topic? How do the description, dialogue, etc. build toward this significance?

 

 

 

 

  1. Are the details and descriptions well-focused? Are important details missing, or do some appear off focus?

 

 

 

 

  1. Do the details appeal to all of the senses? Are sounds and dialogue included?

 

 

 

 

  1. How well has the author balanced description and reflection? Do these elements enhance each other or seem to be contradictory?

 

 

 

  1. How could the paper better fit the assignment or make a stronger impression?

 

 

 

 

8.  List two suggestions that would most improve the final draft.

 

 

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