Title ___________________________________  Author ________________________

Reviewer  ____________________________________

Read the draft carefully and write comments directly on the draft before completing this sheet. Be specific and make suggestions.

1. What are the strengths of the paper? What works the best?

2. Does the author make the significance of the event obvious enough? Do the description, dialogue, and choice of detail build toward the significance?

3. Are the details descriptive and well-focused? Is more information or detail needed in certain sections? More dialogue?

4. Does the paper flow well? Where could transitions and/or language be improved to improve the flow? Are there organizational problems?

5. How could the paper better fit the assignment or make a stronger impression?

6. List two suggestions that would MOST improve this draft.

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